Thursday, December 11, 2014

Intro to Poetry

1. The significance of the poem "working together" is that in order to get anything accomplished in this world you have to work together. It could be something as simple as a group project or sending a space ship into space. Most of everything in this world requires teamwork and that's an important skill to have. 
2. The tone of the poem is very gloomy and remorseful. 
3. My mood as I read this poem was sad. It kinda made me realize more that things really don't stay the same throughout life. That people do get old and die. And that you have to live your life without regrets doing what you want and need to do or you'll end up dwelling over your life. 
4. There is a shift when ha says "I am thinking of the way the intangible air" , it goes from talking about working together to lines filled with hidden meaning. 
5. The theme of the poem is working together for a central purpose. 



Wednesday, December 10, 2014

comparison poem essay

To comprehend means to grasp with the mind. there is no possible way you can comprehend these poems without deeply analyzing them, which is what i did with the poem working together by David whyte. this poem brings a sense of realness to a lot of things, and situations in the world. for example “we shape ourself to fit this world” most of us continuously do things to portray a person that is not who we truly are. we shape our self to what we think the world expects us to be, these worldly expectations. “and by the world are shaped again” . But the truth is the worldly expectations are made by us, we are the world, so if we  set the expectations realistically then we know how to live up to them realistically. “the visible and the invisible”. i took this as the people you see all over the tv and the magazines to us everyday people. but then i also compared this to all the recent race riots going on in ferguson. How African Americans feel invisible and they feel as if the white race is the only visible race. it really could be interpreted many different ways. “working together in common cause, to produce the  miraculous” on this earth nothing is accomplished without working together for a goal. weather is something small like a group project in school or something larger then life like sending a spaceship into space. skipping down a couple of lines and we get to the lines saying “shape our own self by forming it well, to the great intangibles about us”. this served as an amazing close out because at the end of the day, just like at the end of the poem its about what we make out of life with what we have.  
this poem stood out to me more than the others for one reason, i could really relate to it and comprehend what the authors point was. The other poems i didn't seem to interpret well because they kinda beat around the bush. “summons” by Robert Francis did not make any sense to me whatsoever. it was hard to relate or to take a meaning or for in fact anything away from it. “Keep me from going to sleep too soon Or if I go to sleep too soon Come wake me up. Come any hour Of night. Come whistling up the road. Stomp on the porch. Bang on the door.” compare that to the first two lines of “we shape ourselves..” and it's clear to see which one is easier to understand.  when i read that poem, i don't know what i'm reading, its a bunch of random words put together to make a poem. you have no clue who Francis is talking about or who he is referencing.
David whyte's poem is a work of literature i can see applying to my everyday life whereas Robert Francis’s has little or no meaning to me.


Friday, December 5, 2014

Poetry remix

We shape our self
To fit this world

And by the world
Are shaped again.

The visible 
And the invisible

Working together 
In common cause,

To produce
The miraculous.

I am thinking of the way
The intangible air

Passed at speed
Round a shaped wing

Easily
Holds our weight.


So may we, in this life
Trust

To those elements
We have yet to see
Or imagine, 
And look for the true

Shape of our own self, 
By forming it well
To the great

Monday, October 27, 2014

Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Vocabulary #4

obsequious-obedient or attentive to an excessive or servile degree
my dog loves me so much that he is going to be nothing but obsequious.
beatitude-supreme blessedness
people who have a great attitude and stay positive receive endless beatitude.
bete noire-a person or thing that one particularly dislikes
sharen is such a bete noire.
bode-be an omen of a particular outcome
Your future will not bode well if you keep up with this apathetic attitude.
dank-disagreeably damp, musty, and typically cold
The are was unpleasantly dank.
ecumenical-representing a number of different Christian churches
My religous beliefs are ecumenical.
fervid-intensely enthusiastic or passionate, esp. to an excessive degree
She loved him fervidly, but he could not match her enthusiasm.
fetid-smelling extremely unpleasant
The rotting lunch was fetid.
gargantuan-enormous
Your problems are not as gargantuan  as you think.
heyday-the period of a person's or thing's greatest success, popularity, or vigor
Make everyday your heyday!
incubus-a male demon believed to have sexual intercourse with sleeping women
The women was visited by an  seductive incubus.
infrastructure-the basic physical and organizational structures and facilities (e.g., buildings, roads, and power supplies) needed for the operation of a society or enterprise
The society crumbled due to its weak infrastructure.
inveigle-persuade (someone) to do something by means of deception or flattery
She could always inveigle information out of me.
kudos-praise and honor received for an achievement
If you can complete this you will have my kudos.
lagniappe-something given as a bonus or extra gift
Extra credit is a lagniappe.
prolix-(of speech or writing) using or containing too many words; tediously lengthy
I prefer pithy speeches to prolix ones.
protege-a person who is guided and supported by an older and more experienced or influential person
My protege has much to learn.
prototype-a first, typical or preliminary model of something, esp. a machine, from which other forms are developed or copied.
This is just the prototype, not the finished product.
sycophant-a person who acts obsequiously toward someone important in order to gain advantage
He earned his grade by being a sycophant  towards his teacher.
tautology-the saying of the same thing twice in different words, generally considered to be a fault of style
His repetitive essay included numerous tautologies.
truckle-to submit or yield obsequiously or tamely
When dealing with a bellicose person, sometimes it is best to just swallow your pride and truckle.

Hamlet Notes



Sunday, October 19, 2014

Literature Analysis #2

The color purple

  1. This novel is about an african american girl named celie, she doesn't come from much but the one thing she can say she has is her sister. growing up she was abused and raped by her step father Alphonso who fathered her two children. Cellie is infatuated with writing letters to God looking for some sort of answer, but was soon discouraged by the passing of her mother. Cellie and Nettie continue getting into heated arguments with Alphonso, who continues to beat Cellie.  one day “Mr” comes looking for permission to marry Nettie, but Alphonso offers up Cellie instead because of his growing lust of Nettie. Cellie moves out to be with her new unwanted husband and this results in Alphonso starting to beat on Nettie. as the story unfolds “Mr” still wants Nettie and he decided to pursue her so she  decides to run away leaving Cellie to think Nettie has died. Shugg “mr’s” other lover comes down to town and butts heads with Cellie, but then it only became a matter of time before they put their differences aside and realized that they were sexually attracted to each other. Shugg finds another man besides “mr” to form a relationship with while continuing her relationship with Cellie. while shugg was staying in cellie and “mr’s” house she finds letters from Nettie to Cellie that were hidden by “Mr”. these letters confirmed that she was still alive living in africa with two missionaries who have two adopted children. these children were cellies. this gives cellie the confidence to stand up to “Mr” saying that her and Shuggs are moving to tennessee. they both relocate into Tennessee and later Cellie finds that Alfonso had passed away. she moves back to Georgia to inherit her mother's property like she was supposed to before.
  2. There are far more themes in “ The color Purple” than i could even tell you but one that really popped out to me is that you have to find ways to take control of your life and figure out who you are as a person. some situations in Cellies life were uncontrollable, but for other situations she let people control what she did and who she was as a person. and i know what you're thinking, it was a time where things weren't easy for woman, but she took countless years to build up courage to tell the man she was in an arranged marriage to and who was cheating on her that she was leaving, she really cared for her sister but never pursued to really search for her. there are little things she could have done, or i think she could have done to better her life even if it was by the smallest amount. This i believe also goes along with feminism, and standing up for what you know your rights are.
  3. The tone of the book is serious, blissfully ignorent,empowered, and fearfull.
Empowered- “ Im poor, black, and i might even be ugly, but dear God i’m here. I’m     here.”
Serious-  “I loves Harpo, God Knows i do, but Ill kill him dead fo i let him beat me”.
Fearful- "He start to choke me, saying You better shut up and git used to it. But I don't never git used to it. And now I feels sick every time I be the one to cook."
Ignorence- He beat me today cause he say I winked at a boy in church. I may have got somethin in my eye but I didn’t wink. I don’t even look at mens. That’s the truth.
  1. syntax- Lets not forget this story is told in first person by Cellie who wasn't fortunate enough to have an education provided to her.the syntax of the story is very jumbled and uses words in the wrong place with the wrong meaning. or either her speeches just dont make sence.
"Well, us talk and talk about God, but I’m still adrift. Trying to chase that old white man out of my head. I been so busy thinking bout him I never truly notice nothing God make."
diction-  the diction in “The color purple” is uneducated and illiterate.
"Us sleep like sisters, me and Shug."
symbolism- the color purple is very symbolic in the book. at the beginning Cellie is having a hard time in life, struggling with everything, her dad, her mother passing her sister and having an arranged marriage. she has no purple to show a light in her life, the light that God is giving her. then she meets Shugg, and Shugg shows her what its like to have color in her life. i believe that purple symbolizes all that Cellie has gone through to get to where she is and that she can finally be self satisfied, independent and happy.
Shugg: More than anything God love admiration.
Celie: You saying God is vain?
Shugg: No, not vain, just wanting to share a good thing. I think it pisses God off when you walk by the colour purple in a field and don't notice it.
Celie: You saying it just wanna be loved like it say in the bible?
Shug: Yeah, Celie. Everything wanna be loved. Us sing and dance, and holla just wanting to be loved. Look at them trees. Notice how the trees do everything people do to get attention. except walk?
Shug: Oh Miss Celie, I feels like singing!
Tone - the tone of “the color purple” is rather depressing
personification- “For six months the heavens and the winds abused the people of Olinka. Rain came down in spears, stabbing away the mud of their walls.”
simile-  “ Sound echo across the yard like shots”
hyperbole- “When Nettie’s foot come down on the porch I almost die.”
rhetorical questions- “Did I Tell you he writes verses? And loves to sing?”
imagery- “The looking glass hang crooked, the curtains torn. The bed look like the stuffing pulled out.”
metaphor-  ”They swing through every now and then, drunk from eating and enjoying the heat, buzz enough to make me drowsy.”

Characterization
  1. Alice Walker uses direct characterization in many ways in her astounding book “The color Purple”, here are some of the few i found. One that seemed quite obvious to me was how one of the characters were named Shugg, standing for sugar. Shugg was one that everyone wanted a piece of, she was sweet and she was constantly being described as dressing desirable. "All the men got they eyes glued to Shug's bosom. I got my eyes glued there too. I feel my nipples harden under my dress. My little button sort of perk up too. Shug, I say to her in my mind, Girl, you looks like a real good time, the Good Lord knows you do." Another example is in the beginning of the book when celie is talking to God asking why she ends up in so many undesirable situations. my impression of Shugg is that shes just like everyone else, shes confused and lost but she just wants to have someone to love and someone to love her. Another example is in the beginning of the book when Celie was talking to go asking why she is always put in bad situations that she had no control over. “Dear God, I am fourteen years old. I have always been a good girl. Maybe you can give me a sign letting me know what is happening to me.” I thought after i read this that this seemed to be a girl who had the best intentions and who deserved the world, but who always seemed to catch the hot end of the stick. some examples of indirect characterization are  when Alphonso treats Nettie better than he did Celie. Also when he would beat Celie for reasons that were unexplainable.”He beat me today cause he say I winked at a boy in church. I may have got somethin in my eye but I didn’t wink. I don’t even look at mens.”  I believe Alice Walker heavily used indirect characterization with Alphonso because on top of that the first time we meet him in the book is when he is raping celie. “He  never had a kine word to say to me. Just say You gonna do what your mammy wouldn’t.” while the rest of that quote is a bit more than a little too inappropriate to finish. to tag onto that example another one is of the character Albert. We go through the book thinking Albert is a horrible controlling human being, but then he suddenly changes and realizes that it just might be a little better to be kind. this is indirect characterization because when Celie leaves him for Shugg and shugg wants to move to memphis without him he soon realizes that he is all alone because of his actions. Albert then decides to make a kind gesture towards Celie to try to make peace with her by revealing to her that her sister is not dead by giving her all of the old letters she had sent to Celie months before.
  2. I feel as if the Syntax and Diction stayed the same through the whole book. Celie wasn't one to put blame or judgement on anyone and since the book was told through her eyes i would say it would be hard to pick out if the syntax or diction did change at any particular point in the book. I don't believe there is an example because never once did Celie react differently from how she would have acted in any other part of the book in any one particular scene.
  3. Celie is a very dynamic character to me, towards the end of the book you really see her start to become this confident self sure human being which is such a big change from the beginning of the book when she was timid lost scared and confused all of the time. I would consider Celie a round character, the more you read the more you see how she thinks and that there is a lot more to her then what everyone thinks. you find that she's not stupid, she just hasn't been taught what's applicable to living life, and once she starts learning she begins changing into a stronger person.
  4. I came away from this book feeling like i met Celie and i went through some of her struggles with her. i know it may be kind of weird but i feel like you really know a person when you know or live through some of the strangest moments they have experienced in their lifetime. so i took one of Celies strangest moments is her affair with Shugg. i feel like in the beginning only close friends would know all the details along with negatives and positives of the situation. That short but detailed section really made me feel like i was one of her good friends who she was just telling a story to.